Hot wind flowed lightly through the night carrying a burnt smell that would change the world. A tall Rod lifted his head and began to run away from the giant, burnt, fleshy blob. He looked human except for his half bio mechanical suit. He blinked in surprise. The message had been correct: they were here. Or were they? He weighed the odds, then said “I hope this is it.”
In writing this week, we have been learning how to create a suspenseful beginning through imagery and dialogue. Imagery means using vivid language based on the senses. Good writers use sensory experiences to make their readers have a feeling of suspense. Suspense is a feeling of excitement and uncertainty about what will hapen next. Dialogue is a conversation between characters.
I enjoyed writing the suspenseful beginning
I did well at writing the suspenseful beginning